Comments on: Haven II

By: UnaVitaSegreta

UnaVitaSegreta — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 02:36:41 +0000

I loved loved loved it! And the snow just adds the perfect touch!!!

By: Anne-So

Anne-So — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 15:51:31 +0000

Hou la la! It’s so hot it took me several days to actually read it. Too much interference from boring real life. I might just have been on their rhythm, only reading instead of, well, you know.

Despite the constant hotness, you wrote some very sweet and important intimate conversations. Loved Laura’s ‘I…’ and her sort of telling of her affair.

Great job, as always. Thanks for posting.

By: damaged_hearts

damaged_hearts — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 10:42:48 +0000

Wow, just wow!

That was just amazing from beginning to end…

By: 4nzic

4nzic — Wed, 07 Oct 2009 07:19:22 +0000

Wow. This was almost too much for me to handle! How on earth could Bill keep it up for so long(literally and figuratively)?
He must have some special little blue pills, because that was a lot of times they did it.

Seriously though, I read this last night and have had the story in the back of my mind all day at work, the “feelings” have stayed with me, which to my mind is a sign of an excellent piece of writing.

I’ve got to admit that I’m not such a great fan of that amount of loving, in one story, but the atmosphere you created, and the story line, the love and emotions all combine to make something memorable to me. Great job. Thank you.

By: Louise Ellis

Louise Ellis — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 04:14:48 +0000

Love it – but you knew that! Love the way he handles her confession, and accepts how she tells him. Lovely waking up snowed in the next morning…The entire thing is passionate, caring, intimate, and demonstrates a deep love between them. Again, love it!

By: redrock

redrock — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 03:54:58 +0000

Thank you! Thank you! I am totally spoiled tonight reading this. I’d been hoping for a sequel and you did not disapoint. It was as wonderful as the first and then some. I love seeing Bill and Laura happy. You always seem to portray these characters perfectly everytime! Thanks again for a fantastic and not to mention lengthy jaunt into the haven on NC. I loved every word.