Comments on: Midnight Snack II

By: damaged_hearts

damaged_hearts — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 22:20:34 +0000

that was gorgeous..

By: Tara

Tara — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 07:10:01 +0000

I love that you have made this into a series. It is made of all kinds of awesome. Great fun to read, hot as hell itself and most importantly (for me at least) your description of Bill has me drooling. He is so frakking hot.

By: Bella~

Bella~ — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 04:21:58 +0000

Great Chapter can’t wait for more I hope that she blows off Richard for good now!!!

By: AngelTrisha9

AngelTrisha9 — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 03:23:53 +0000

Oh, sweet, you’re making this a series! Not that I’m bouncing in my chair with gleeor something, *whistle innocently*, but I’m really glad!

This is absolutely awesome. I love how easy they are with one another even if they,ve just met. They’re fated. I’m really intrigued on why Laura’s blonde, though. Why’d she do such a thing?

By: Lee-ann

Lee-ann — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 02:26:20 +0000

mmm..love your descriptions of my favourite commander/admiral.

By: Louise Ellis

Louise Ellis — Tue, 20 Oct 2009 02:13:25 +0000

Awesome series, a great a/u look…and they’re so comfortable (and hot!) with each other, it reads very naturally!
Looking forward to seeing where the relationship goes, and how it fits into their lives…