Comments on: Lazy Afternoon IV

By: CQ

CQ — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 13:01:59 +0000

well, it’s not really a “date” but yeah, dinner is on the menu, for her and Bill

Thanks for the feedback, ladies. I’m thrilled you’re enjoying the story. It’s always nice to hear from readers, makes my muse very happy and has been known to kick her into overdrive … lol

By: AngelTrisha9

AngelTrisha9 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 05:59:02 +0000

*happy sigh* laura,s gonne be treated as she deserves now. A real date not in shadows or fear of being caught, just being appreciated by a real guy. I love this. It,s so perfect! Thank you for it.

By: UnaVitaSegreta

UnaVitaSegreta — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 22:59:26 +0000

Aaaaawww! They’re about to go out on a real date now!!! I can’t wait!

By: missbevcrusher

missbevcrusher — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 21:59:09 +0000

Well done, girlie.

By: Jess

Jess — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 21:48:15 +0000

Just devoured this in one sittting and girl it should come with a free cold shower, as always your writing is beyond good…You’ve turned this story to a delicious PWP to now a hot, sex, funny romantic saga…Long may it continue. Thank you!

By: Jennie

Jennie — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 21:03:17 +0000

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. I can’t wait to read more.

By: Alesia

Alesia — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 20:26:25 +0000

I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this. It is incredibly hot but this chapter was beautifully intimate and tender. I love how you have moved this from just a simple frak to a discovery of wants and needs. You have created a really fabulous series and I will be anxiously awaiting more.

By: LegallyB

LegallyB — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 19:31:34 +0000

You’re writing is lovely and emotionally evocative. I love the line “For her, it had become an altar for her self-worth and she’d grown weary of the sacrifice.”

Dare I hope to see a confrontation between Adar and Roslin in the near future?