Comments on: Public Relations IV

By: whatever

whatever — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 21:22:40 +0000

I’m re-reading this, and I wanted to mention how much I enjoyed Bill thinking of himself not as dashing, but as puttering — love it!

By: whatever

whatever — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 01:21:05 +0000

You make the ordinary extraordinary.

By: trekchic

trekchic — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 22:56:17 +0000

The way you make even the most mundane bits of life jump off the page, it’s amazing.
There are times when I forget none of this is canon, not that I care, but that rarely happens with an au story.
Bravo!

By: mary_me11

mary_me11 — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 10:15:13 +0000

Very touching chapter…
I’m looking very much forward to this upcoming gala event. I forgot at what kind of political event the met for the first time, but it must have been something near it. I hope they will remember it…..

By: xtoothfairy

xtoothfairy — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 09:53:16 +0000

Wonderful chapter. You make them doing the most mundane things exciting.
I loved Laura’s commentary about the painting and what it meant to her.

By: ms_elaine_neous

ms_elaine_neous — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 08:40:12 +0000

I love this story so much! Every new chapter just makes me smile

By: Bella~

Bella~ — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 08:14:55 +0000

Nice Chapter!!

By: Tara

Tara — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 07:44:57 +0000

I love the bit in the office, about the painting. I agree with betani above, it was beautiful.

These moments you give them both are so simple yet have so much depth, I am in awe of your writing skills.

That being said…feed me more, now.

By: betani

betani — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 05:11:31 +0000

“What did you feel?”

The hint of curled the corner of her mouth, then she looked at him. “Happy,” she breathed.

That was so beautiful.

By: Louise Ellis

Louise Ellis — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 05:10:21 +0000

The wonderful simplicity of their morning together is beautiful, mixed in with some light teasing and sensual undertones, finished off with the compassion in her office. Lovely!